So there I was, thinking my WIP was chugging along at a steady, if not swift, pace, and along comes the realization that if my book is going to end up where I want it to, and my characters are going to arrive at their destination, that I am really going to need a map. Or if not a map, then at least a diagram showing the safest route through the reefs, so I don’t end up grounding on a shoal.
See, I tend to write down a lot of notes (well, a lot for me), but I outline my novels in my head, and not all the way through. I plan out the first 10,000 – 15,000 words so that I can get started, hoping that by the time I reach that point (weeks later), I will have gained the trust of my characters and they will have deigned to disclose to me enough bits of their life story so that I can theorize what happened next. (And if I get it wrong, trust me, they let me know.)
It’s a terrible strategy–kind of like the Allies playing for time in World War I, figuring that eventually the Americans would come over and upset the stalemate–but it’s mine. And it although it works–eventually–it’s terribly messy and you really can’t recommend it to your friends.
Anyway, I’m about 17,000 words in now, and I’ve passed the point where I need to do some serious planning or the rest of the book is going to be an unreadable mess with a meandering plot and a deus ex machina ending. I know what constitutes the book’s plot point, the world-altering discovery that will change everything my hero thinks he knows and put his life in far more danger than it’s already in (which is considerable), but I need to know how he gets to that discovery–and he hasn’t told me.
Needless to say, I find this annoying, but not for the reasons you may think. Some authors would view it as disloyal, but most of my protagonists are rather self-effacing sorts, and the fact that they are telling me their stories at all is a favor to me, not something they do for themselves, so calling it “disloyal” would be an error. Rather, it annoys me because it slows me down, and if I could outline things better in the first place I wouldn’t need their help.
Having been down this road many times, I know how it works. I spend a few days cajoling them for ideas, begging to hear the next leg of their adventures, and they harrumph and order another beer and in the end give me nothing. Then it will be my turn. I’ll stop begging and go back to writing. And I will write how I think their story continued. And they’ll harrumph even louder that I got it wrong and bang their mugs on the table and beer will go sloshing onto the floor and they’ll gripe at me not only for being a lousy hack but also for wasting good beer.
Which is character-speak for, “You’re buying the next round.” Which is a joke, because I bought the last one.
Characters. Can’t live with ’em, can’t write without ’em.
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